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PostPosted: 2011-02-15 21:09:36    Post subject: 《钝》 Reply with quote


文/殷晓媛

冰临城下的季节,诗的荒冢挂满
梨花般的纸钱。络绎不绝的人前来祭扫、
瞻仰并供奉上反季节的鲜果:他们的血和灵魂
琥珀般裹住任意一颗干桃核,春色的果肉便水灵灵
丰腴起来。但他们日渐清瘦,握不稳
香烛的手,沾满黄土。他从这里路过,但他今年

不想听到任何关于诗的音讯。不想听说
黄鹂像熟透的月光,落在他窗外,哀唱到
柳枝疯摆,溪水倒流;也不想听说晨雾的手
擦净湖面,镜底的锦鲤就露水般
一滴滴掉出来,装满路过行人
空落的衣衫。他只是急切需要一些角色,
奢靡的男人、诡谲的女人、孤高的麋鹿和
会说话的刺猬,林林总总各种精神载体,像《绝望主妇》
第六季海报,拿起枪刀剑戟、弓弩戈矛,
相互大行杀戮,化为烟水,化为流云和花瓣。
或者写一篇檄文,代表黑进攻白,再以白的名义
颠覆黑。他很忙碌,忙着为文字
塞满坚硬的鳞片,今天他不愿想起诗,惧怕

一只唐突而毒舌的喜鹊在圆月前,以笛声
为背景对他再提起。他渴望沉入梦乡。
满园春色对他来说,是一场
关于诗的后遗症。
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PostPosted: 2011-02-19 19:45:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

这意象用的很给力。欣赏。严重地提一下。
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PostPosted: 2011-02-19 19:53:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

风动 wrote:
这意象用的很给力。欣赏。严重地提一下。


问好诗友!
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 04:40:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

看到冰临城下想起北京的雪下的很迟~这首诗歌层次很丰富~从开始的明写祭典到最后的隐喻祭典~
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 16:34:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
看到冰临城下想起北京的雪下的很迟~这首诗歌层次很丰富~从开始的明写祭典到最后的隐喻祭典~


问好安姐,谢谢评读!
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