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《灯笼 绕风缠绵》
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PostPosted: 2011-02-16 21:14:39    Post subject: 《灯笼 绕风缠绵》 Reply with quote

《灯笼 绕风缠绵》


我提着灯笼
坐在阳光里 等天黑
他如约而至 满脸欢畅
身后 跟来一群闪闪的星星

我娇嗔他的疏忽
它们会打扰这里的宁静
月亮也睁大了眼睛
将她白纱般的清辉
洒在我的身上

我们 靠在时光的肩上
红烛里的细语悄悄流淌
羞涩爬满它们红彤彤的脸
就这样 我坐在灯笼里
你坐在灯笼外
绕风缠绵



写于2011年元宵节
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PostPosted: 2011-02-21 04:59:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

为唐婉而作?
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PostPosted: 2011-02-21 09:49:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们 靠在时光的肩上
红烛里的细语悄悄流淌
羞涩爬满它们红彤彤的脸
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PostPosted: 2011-02-21 23:08:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位老师的光临,唐婉是我原来的笔名,一直还在用。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-12 02:07:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

我提着灯笼
坐在阳光里 等天黑

有新意!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-17 23:30:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢少君。
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