影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2011-02-12 04:46:17 Post subject: 七律。初一夜闻雨（新韵） |
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七律。初一夜闻雨（新韵）
一梦青春日月悬，何妨微笑对长天。
腾云此夜烟花载，奉雪他乡游子年。
不变祝福惟肺腑，常闻安健尽团圆。
东风也许多情事，润物无声细雨前。
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2011-02-12 07:08:59 Post subject: |
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寒水兄新春愉快！
首联，尾联韵味深长，欣赏！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2011-02-12 11:54:13 Post subject: |
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| 与黄老师同感。新春快乐！ |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2011-02-13 04:22:45 Post subject: |
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两位斑斑周末好
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2011-02-13 06:15:09 Post subject: |
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润物无声细雨前——韵味悠长。学习了。
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水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2011-02-13 07:59:33 Post subject: |
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何妨微笑对长天，润物无声细雨前 - 好句！
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