笑聊
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 Posted: 2011-02-09 04:22:57 Post subject: 玉梅令-咏梅再和莹雪 |
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清香彻骨，冷艳难容处。迎风笑、世人无语。
总想和君诉。岂是自相欺？心顿觉，古琴弄谱。
梅妻鹤子，有几人堪慕？平常事、不需倾吐。
便柔情依约，点缀雪为诗，难料定、暗香早许。
附莹雪原玉：
换个中调词牌
《玉梅令（姜夔自度）—咏梅》
扬扬素絮，巧扮庭深处。馨香裂，残冬初顾。
有玉梅几树，自在报临春，花暗吐，入词韵谱。
聆听笛曲，飘满闲池路。花容妙，愿听乐诉。
弄笔襟怀久，取絮付新歌，添一句，为花舒趣 |
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黄洋界
探花
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| Posted: 2011-02-09 07:32:45 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳，欣赏！问好二位新春好！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2011-02-09 09:47:11 Post subject: |
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笑聊，点缀雪为诗 - 好意境！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2011-02-10 02:17:48 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 唱和俱佳，欣赏！问好二位新春好！ |
黄老师新春好！感谢点评鼓励。 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2011-02-10 02:19:25 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
| 笑聊，点缀雪为诗 - 好意境！ |
问老师新春好！谢雅誉鼓励！ |
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宁家珍
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Joined: 20 May 2009
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Location: 中国黄山
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| Posted: 2011-02-10 06:41:26 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏唱和佳作，问候二位老师新春好！ |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2011-02-11 03:05:28 Post subject: |
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| 宁家珍 wrote: |
| 欣赏唱和佳作，问候二位老师新春好！ |
谢谢家珍诗友欣赏鼓励！新春好！ |
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