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他的眼神等投稿第三期

寒丁
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Posted: 2007-04-04 03:41:17 Post subject: 他的眼神等投稿第三期

理解力文/寒丁有时候真的不知道善良究竟是何物当你用尽善意对他人而他人却用尽恶意对你时你才知道一粒老鼠屎掉在了一锅好汤《他的眼神》他的眼神很恶毒一只猫见了退缩到墙的一角一只老鼠见了朝着他靠近《一张桌子翻倒了》科长的办公室挤满了无声的眼睛在这只前是没有过的景象室内没一个人也没声响一张桌子翻倒了四只脚朝天，蹬着地下几片白纸被一瓶墨水染黑 _________________ 冷是另一种暖

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-04-04 04:22:20 Post subject:

他的眼神很恶毒一只猫见了退缩到墙的一角一只老鼠见了朝着他靠近。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。有意蕴。

寒丁
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Posted: 2007-04-04 20:24:29 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

他的眼神
很恶毒
一只猫见了
退缩到墙的一角
一只老鼠见了
朝着他
靠近
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。有意蕴。

十分感谢福治的品评，握
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三色堇
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Posted: 2007-04-04 22:29:19 Post subject:

看好第二首，其他却少新意

寒丁
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Posted: 2007-04-05 03:07:04 Post subject:

三色堇 wrote:

看好第二首，其他却少新意

谢谢三色堇小姐的看好，多批评
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白水
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Posted: 2007-04-05 20:22:12 Post subject:

写实的, 尖锐的. 这种诗歌远比抒情的难度大. 顶.

寒丁
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Posted: 2007-04-06 01:11:13 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

写实的, 尖锐的.
这种诗歌远比抒情的难度大. 顶.

你说的确实是，迎难而上吧！感谢白水的关注品评，多批
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