戀海
秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009
Posts: 383
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 Posted: 2011-01-13 00:15:58 Post subject: 【七律】冬夜 |
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幾日寒霜掃夜巷
倚窗對月添淒涼
青春夢小朱顏色
歲月愁多白髮長
作賦長門司馬顯
吐辭歸去淵明芳
昔時有用文書筆
古調今吟暗神傷 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2011-01-13 19:44:55 Post subject: |
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| 好文采 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2011-01-14 06:59:44 Post subject: |
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倚窗对月、古调今吟 - 婉雅！
問好！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2011-01-14 18:11:52 Post subject: |
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| 诗意优雅，格律工稳。欣赏！ |
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戀海
秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009
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| Posted: 2011-01-18 02:26:05 Post subject: |
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問好白水螢雪以及版主
謝謝你們的回應及鼓勵 |
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胡恢宗
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Joined: 15 Mar 2008
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| Posted: 2011-01-22 19:47:02 Post subject: |
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青春梦小朱颜色，岁月愁多白发长。感叹人生易老，岁月无多，故而“古调今吟暗伤”。
祝你新春快乐，笑口常开。
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水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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戀海
秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009
Posts: 383
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| Posted: 2011-01-24 21:41:39 Post subject: |
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| 胡恢宗 wrote: |
青春梦小朱颜色，岁月愁多白发长。感叹人生易老，岁月无多，故而“古调今吟暗伤”。
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