老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
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Posted: 2011-01-21 19:01:04 Post subject: 吟韵 |
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吟韵
挑灯敲韵伴清吟,
刺破青纱隔岸闻。
吟到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总消魂。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-21 19:37:45 Post subject: |
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咏到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总销魂。
老山兄,至情至性之人,方有令人销魂之作啊。问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-21 20:08:00 Post subject: |
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情真之人,遇销魂之事,必发销魂之声也。学习了。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-22 08:10:09 Post subject: |
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挑灯敲韵伴清吟, 声沉声放总消魂 - 至情心语! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
老山Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-22 20:21:47 Post subject: |
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问好黄洋界、胡恢宗、白云闲人,并祝新年愉快!
谢谢你们的点评! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-24 03:41:49 Post subject: |
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吟到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总消魂。
至情至性之语!读来黯然。问好老山兄! |
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