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七律 . 兔年咏兔
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PostPosted: 2011-01-21 22:18:07    Post subject: 七律 . 兔年咏兔 Reply with quote
兔年咏兔
虎威卸甲隐山林，玉兔迎春五福临。
火眼洞穿天下事，霜毫管诉庶民心。
销魂尤记输龟赛，捣药时萦济世针。
风险预防藏远虑，早营三窟白云深。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-21 23:16:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
火眼洞穿天下事，霜毫管诉庶民心。
销魂尤记输龟赛，捣药时萦济世针。

托物言志，寓之哲理。学习了！
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PostPosted: 2011-01-22 00:09:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
老山兄客套了。全诗直白有余，空灵不足，已成性格，要改也难。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-22 04:56:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
挺贴切的
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PostPosted: 2011-01-22 05:01:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
咏兔言志，心系苍生。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-22 07:22:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
从兔之外形到兔之性格加以描写，可谓穷形尽相，又巧于用典。学习了！
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PostPosted: 2011-01-22 07:55:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
胡恢宗，好一首寓理咏志诗！祝兔年五福临！
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PostPosted: 2011-01-22 17:07:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
感谢四位诗长阅评并问好。
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