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相见欢《友聚》

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-16 10:15:38 Post subject: 相见欢《友聚》

相见欢《友聚》闲来小聚黄昏，侃经纶宣纸荧屏今古任乾坤千古事，谁留字？问诗魂吟罢残阳明月喜临门

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Posted: 2011-01-16 15:26:08 Post subject:

八仙过海显神通，论画谈诗兴致浓。大雪纷飞添美景，茶香友聚乐无穷。

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Posted: 2011-01-16 18:37:43 Post subject:

惬意。

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-16 18:56:45 Post subject:

谢谢庆宏和诗，问好莹雪

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-01-17 02:42:11 Post subject:

千古事，谁留字？问诗魂！好气派，大手笔。又见白水豪气！

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Posted: 2011-01-17 08:15:40 Post subject:

挥笔潇灑、泼墨豪放！白水：〝皓〞为仄声，而该处格律为平声，可否修饰为〝明月〞呢！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-17 14:54:40 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

千古事，谁留字？问诗魂！

好气派，大手笔。又见白水豪气！

谢谢笑聊鼓励。真希望你早日康复。

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-17 14:57:04 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

挥笔潇灑、泼墨豪放！
白水：〝皓〞为仄声，而该处格律为平声，可否修饰为〝明月〞呢！

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谢谢白云老师提醒，不好意思，我把变格词谱搞混了，这就改 Embarassed

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Posted: 2011-01-18 07:26:24 Post subject:

白水，爽朗、豪放！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-01-19 02:51:08 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

千古事，谁留字？问诗魂！

好气派，大手笔。又见白水豪气！

谢谢笑聊鼓励。真希望你早日康复。

谢谢白水关怀！只是公司事多，常感力不从心。

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-19 13:37:02 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

白水，爽朗、豪放！

谢谢老师指教与鼓励

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-19 13:47:33 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

千古事，谁留字？问诗魂！

好气派，大手笔。又见白水豪气！

谢谢笑聊鼓励。真希望你早日康复。

谢谢白水关怀！只是公司事多，常感力不从心。

问好笑聊，文武之道，一张一弛。事业固然重要，但身体是本。北美的朋友都惦记着你，前些天冰清还说，说不准你啥时候能来Toronto 和大家一聚呢。我觉得她的主意挺好，抽个时间旅游一下，对身体会有好处。 Very Happy

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-01-19 19:43:15 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

千古事，谁留字？问诗魂！

好气派，大手笔。又见白水豪气！

谢谢笑聊鼓励。真希望你早日康复。

谢谢白水关怀！只是公司事多，常感力不从心。

问好白水！你说得对，我会调节好的。是很想去北美会会师友们，看看多伦多旖旎的异国情调。问北美师友们好！

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-31 17:37:36 Post subject:

问好笑聊，朋友们等你来加拿大，新春愉快

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-02-04 01:14:12 Post subject:

问好白水！拜年了：恭贺新禧！吉祥如意！

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Posted: 2011-02-04 04:29:46 Post subject:

八仙过海显神通，论画谈诗兴致浓。大雪纷飞添美景，茶香友聚乐无穷。欣赏好绝，问候庆宏老师新春快乐！

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Posted: 2011-02-04 09:25:54 Post subject:

宁家珍 wrote:

八仙过海显神通，论画谈诗兴致浓。
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谢谢家珍诗友！祝新年快乐！

白水
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Posted: 2011-02-04 15:32:33 Post subject:

宁家珍 wrote:

八仙过海显神通，论画谈诗兴致浓。
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老师新春快乐

白水
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Posted: 2011-02-04 15:34:15 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问好白水！拜年了：恭贺新禧！吉祥如意！

谢谢笑聊，问好新春。 Very Happy

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