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渭滨垂钓歌（古风）

王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-09 07:21:04 Post subject: 渭滨垂钓歌（古风）

陇阪有钓客，经年恋渭滨。案牍劳形罢，心思即垂纶。赋闲时邀约，消闲了夙因。暂避喧嚣境，试作葛天民。远看烟霞秀，近观草成茵。拂来南风煦，还就夏荷亲。野菊独烂漫，飞雪对酌人。去来熙攘累，操持自在身。静坐风烟凈，疏影俱清新。不觉天将暮，微醉谁问津。造化诚为主，浮生皆是宾。惠庄辩濠上，千秋问锦鳞。武陵难寻觅，伤愧我居秦。鹭鸥忘机巧，雅意聊可申。碧波生浩荡，幽婉一怀春。明朝相与乐，焉知孰与伦。作歌尝轻咏，夫复用缕陈。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2011-01-09 08:21:52 Post subject:

四季垂钓闲适人生 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2011-01-09 08:31:22 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

四季垂钓
闲适人生

姜尚钓君王，严光钓名望。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-01-09 09:00:14 Post subject:

古悥悠然，君明兄，无怀氏之民欤？葛天氏之民欤？ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-01-09 09:30:09 Post subject:

鹭鸥忘机巧，雅怀聊可申。碧波生浩荡，幽婉一怀春。- 好一曲垂钓歌！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2011-01-09 16:01:46 Post subject:

好文采，欣赏。

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Posted: 2011-01-09 16:24:23 Post subject:

远看烟霞秀，回眸草成茵。南风夏荷媚，秋来野菊亲。一钓在手，不是武陵，胜似武陵。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-10 05:54:54 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

四季垂钓
闲适人生

连兄同感，欣慰为好

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王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-10 05:57:22 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

连南河 wrote:

四季垂钓
闲适人生

姜尚钓君王，严光钓名望。

在下只钓清闲不钓鱼，问候兄.
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王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-10 06:00:00 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

古悥悠然，君明兄，无怀氏之民欤？葛天氏之民欤？

谢黄兄，在下欲效故事而不得，聊以自慰了，问好！
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王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-10 06:04:05 Post subject:

白云兄好！能使自家安静下来，善莫大焉啊！白水兄多赐教，问好远握！问好胡兄，心在武陵，则武陵无处不在啊，一握~~~！ _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

冰清
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Posted: 2011-01-10 20:21:06 Post subject:

虚静恬适，好句连连。君明，好一个垂钓歌，被你悟出了许多许多...

王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-10 20:42:18 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

虚静恬适，好句连连。

君明，好一个垂钓歌，被你悟出了许多许多...

揖谢冰清先生鼓励末学，惭愧。

在下颇受老庄无为思想影响，允为人生大智慧。惜时为俗世凡尘搅扰，彷徨徘徊。而时有所感，无处诉说，只有诉之笔端，让先生见笑了。

祝安好！ Very Happy

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Posted: 2011-01-10 20:49:24 Post subject:

君明，羡你饱读诗书，羡你惠悟超群。

王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-11 08:00:25 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

君明，羡你饱读诗书，羡你惠悟超群。 Laughing

再谢冰清先生枉顾。
某“好读书，不求甚解”，叶公好龙而已矣。
日前整理未是草，率然成句，可见某对自身尚有自知之明：
蕪詞刪罷汗顏羞，愧對師朋恨未休。
一點癡情無奈甚，空熬夜半讀春秋。
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Posted: 2011-01-12 18:58:52 Post subject:

王君明 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

连南河 wrote:

四季垂钓
闲适人生

姜尚钓君王，严光钓名望。

在下只钓清闲不钓鱼，问候兄.

七绝旧作相和：

清心作饵月为钩，垂钓江河万古流。
将相君王如过鲫，品其滋味在心头。

王君明
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Posted: 2011-01-13 07:58:36 Post subject:

谢过并赏qinghongh先生嘤鸣好和，钓之知音矣！忽忆及夏日垂纶晚归情境，临屏借高韵一和：次qinghongh韵忆夏日垂纶晚归渭滨浑忘太公钩，淘尽风流尽浊流。收拾蛙声三两点，归来明月正当头。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2011-01-13 09:16:32 Post subject:

王君明 wrote:

谢过并赏qinghongh先生嘤鸣好和，钓之知音矣！忽忆及夏日垂纶晚归情境，临屏借高韵一和：
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谢谢君明兄好和诗！问好！

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