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诉衷情-圣诞夜（双调四十五字，桃花水）

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白水
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Posted: 2011-01-02 09:21:43 Post subject:

冰清好，不好意思，这两天尽忙着玩儿了，拜个晚年

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-01-04 21:53:10 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好莹雪，新年快乐

JJ新年好

偶又玩儿回来啦

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-01-06 16:04:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

圣诞夜，“詩淡淡，墨浓浓，诉情衷”，白水情怀，“尽在杯中”。

问好老师，昨天我还提醒秋叶，同诗不宜同音字，自己却犯忌，刚才改了改。谢谢。 Embarassed

白水兄，格律诗之“八病”在唐代诗人已经大多不拘了，词从来就不受限。

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-06 17:58:45 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好莹雪，新年快乐

JJ新年好

偶又玩儿回来啦

回来好好玩儿

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-06 18:07:04 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

圣诞夜，“詩淡淡，墨浓浓，诉情衷”，白水情怀，“尽在杯中”。

问好老师，昨天我还提醒秋叶，同诗不宜同音字，自己却犯忌，刚才改了改。谢谢。 Embarassed

白水兄，格律诗之“八病”在唐代诗人已经大多不拘了，词从来就不受限。

秋香MM，既然是病，还是避避好。 Very Happy

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-01-06 19:03:27 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好莹雪，新年快乐

JJ新年好

偶又玩儿回来啦

回来好好玩儿

哦，好地

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-08 10:53:31 Post subject:

MM，人呢？诗歌也不见

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-01-08 18:43:56 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM，人呢？
诗歌也不见 Cool

JJ，我来啦！昨天刚发完帖子，想动手写诗歌，就有人找偶，偶就又去处理事啦！今天就写。JJ不几天肯定会看到的 Rolling Eyes

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-09 16:07:17 Post subject:

好的，我等着

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