胡恢宗
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 Posted: 2010-12-31 19:11:57 Post subject: 念奴娇 · 新年偶感 |
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念奴娇 · 新年偶感
老来闲适，忆儿时噩运，阴霾华夏。亿万黎民浴战火，血泪城
乡冤洒。霹雳惊雷，驱云逐雾，挽救将颓厦。红旗纷展，动人春讯
频发。 处处虎跃龙腾，山河重整，创造新神话。巨舰航行凭舵
手，引至蓬莱仙岬。歌舞昇平，灯红酒绿，莫处巅峰下。开元天宝，
前车之鉴宜察。
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2011-01-02 08:58:26 Post subject: |
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一曲念奴娇，暢抒胸怀！
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诗中岁月,
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2011-01-02 10:01:12 Post subject: |
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| 居安思危有远见。 |
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黄洋界
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2011-01-02 13:31:14 Post subject: |
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欣慰，警醒，充满爱国情怀。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2011-01-02 16:22:43 Post subject: |
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感谢三位老师阅评，词意缺乏节日气氛，可能不合时宜。
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2011-01-02 20:32:58 Post subject: |
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开元天宝，
前车之鉴宜察。
居安思危，赤子之心。 |
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2011-01-03 17:38:14 Post subject: |
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谢笑聊兄阅评。问好。
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