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七绝•题周抚民祝寿字画

山城子
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Posted: 2010-12-29 00:07:44 Post subject: 七绝•题周抚民祝寿字画

七绝•题周抚民祝寿字画文/ 山城子炎黄之后篆成脉，传至周君意态开。一幅群像齐拜寿，且歌且舞墨神来。 2010-12-29于黔中文化村 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

王君明
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Posted: 2010-12-29 03:17:08 Post subject:

确实好字，好创意，且歌且舞的感觉 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2010-12-29 09:06:03 Post subject:

好字好诗，且歌且舞墨神來！〝篆〞字为仄声，可再斟酌。山城子，祝新年快乐！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-12-29 19:25:20 Post subject:

诗好字佳，如歌似舞。祝新年快乐。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

连南河
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Posted: 2010-12-31 06:27:26 Post subject:

且歌且舞墨神来! 问好山城兄,新年快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2011-01-01 19:37:36 Post subject:

王君明 wrote:

确实好字，好创意，且歌且舞的感觉 Surprised

祝王君明新年吉祥如意！！
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Posted: 2011-01-01 19:38:39 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

好字好诗，且歌且舞墨神來！
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谢谢白云闲人赐教！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2011-01-01 19:39:50 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

诗好字佳，如歌似舞。
祝新年快乐。

祝胡恢宗新年快乐幸福！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2011-01-01 19:40:57 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

且歌且舞墨神来!

问好山城兄,新年快乐!

远握连南河——新年快乐吉祥！！
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Posted: 2011-01-06 16:15:56 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

七绝•题周抚民祝寿字画
文/ 山城子

炎黄之后篆成脉，
传至周君意态开。
一幅群像齐拜寿，
且歌且舞墨神来。

2010-12-29于黔中文化村

山城兄，很传神啊！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-01-10 20:54:04 Post subject:

一幅群像齐拜寿，且歌且舞墨神来。山城师，结句最好：灵动美。 “一幅群像齐拜寿”，“群像”“齐”连用，似可斟酌。个见，敬请海涵。

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