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《无花果》四个
海西男孩
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PostPosted: 2010-11-10 20:41:34    Post subject: 《无花果》四个 Reply with quote

《无花果》

金秋过了
我的发根也从鬓角
上爬
无花果同时掉叶
就剩顶部一块肥绿
我们彼此照镜
互通秘密
被麻雀和妇人窥伺的痛苦
无花也结果
我的花开在遥远的春天
突然间我很想光合

《黑眼圈上的小蚂蚁》

你一照镜子
我就回到干了坏事的男生
青春陪了
皱纹生了
黑眼圈浓了
岁月的小蚂蚁爬在上面
我恨不得
把它煎了烙饼
作了睡梦的药引

《教师节礼物》

双刃剃须刀
拆开刹那的闪光
语文科代表的镜片
我为一湾湾湖水蓝容
为一份份好奇容
世故的莠草拔了
放掉一些堕落的血
我的自留地
每天收割
一茬茬新鲜的爱意

《清明》

我见过您的照片
和我年纪相仿
大哥,今儿就当补喝喜酒
你远行,她小学毕业
我大学分配
从那时起我就给她汇钱
您的女儿就是我的女儿……
您的房子有点黑
到阳光里多走动,吹风,听杜鹃
我酒喝高了,尽说胡话
没说尽的话,就用鞭炮
天色欲雨未雨,我扶您回去
我记住了你的门牌号
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海西男孩
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PostPosted: 2010-12-23 23:37:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

多指教!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-24 04:42:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这组诗歌。特别是这首,让人很感动。

《清明》

我见过您的照片
和我年纪相仿
大哥,今儿就当补喝喜酒
你远行,她小学毕业
我大学分配
从那时起我就给她汇钱
您的女儿就是我的女儿……
您的房子有点黑
到阳光里多走动,吹风,听杜鹃
我酒喝高了,尽说胡话
没说尽的话,就用鞭炮
天色欲雨未雨,我扶您回去
我记住了你的门牌号
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海西男孩
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PostPosted: 2010-12-29 19:41:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
喜欢这组诗歌。特别是这首,让人很感动。
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谢谢
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海西男孩
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PostPosted: 2010-12-29 19:42:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
喜欢这组诗歌。特别是这首,让人很感动。
...


谢谢
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