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白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-28 15:54:57 Post subject:

(9) 五绝 - 风雪抒情漫天风雪舞，大地素箋铺。信步留佳句，豪情千古书。庆宏的这一首，却又從另一个角度，去舒展襟怀。在面对风歌雪舞的悠然气氛中，领略到大自然的美妙，人生的趣意。信步其中，触灵感、拾韵声！在如素雅箋铺的晶莹大地上，泼墨挥毫，佳句泉涌，婉韵暢流，豪情万丈！因而，吟咏出如此浪漫的人生脚步來！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2010-12-28 15:55:09 Post subject:

读来痛快，好

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-28 16:15:47 Post subject:

(10) 五绝 - 听雪抒怀玉絮闻窗落，华章伏案书。悠然倾句去，自在任诗居。无独有偶，莹雪倾注满腔的兴致，细细欣赏玉絮敲窗的乐声！并深深触动了心诗的感应，伏案飞笔，挥灑出抒怀之华章。全诗手法輕盈，笔锋细腻，悠然自得。结句更是画龙点睛，舒发出自在自然的诗居恬淡情怀！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-28 16:17:53 Post subject:

謝謝白水的欢乐图像！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-28 16:45:39 Post subject:

(11) 诉衷情 - 圣诞夜北风飘雪又寒冬，故里愈朦胧。撩拨炭火余热，茶半盏，向長空。诗淡淡，墨浓浓，意重重。几分嗔怨，数曲欢歌，尽在杯中。白水，特别挑选了《诉衷情》这詞牌，于不经意之中，在圣诞夜去细诉内心之衷情。那混和着几分嗔怨、数曲欢歌的情怀尽倾于怀中。白水以娴熟之笔调，似信马由缰之势、如顺手拈來之感，实充盈着内心的丰情。看！巧手地在下阕依始，便化用出三言排句：诗淡淡，墨浓浓，意重重。若风雪中的朦胧，透出淡淡的情怀、浓浓的心思、重重的景意！撩拨开朦胧的风雪，飘向那心系的長空！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-12-29 05:38:50 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

(11) 诉衷情 - 圣诞夜
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白水词情，尽在杯中。

谢谢白云老师精彩诗评及赞誉鼓励！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-29 09:00:38 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏赏评！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-29 15:51:19 Post subject:

(12) 囉嗊曲 - 一筆一墨也風流一詩行一議，千首咏千姿。馨香滋睿智，活水潤心池。通過一诗一議，充分地見识了朋友們诗词妙品的千姿百态；朋友們的狼毫徽墨所詠誦出來的满园花香，正是滋長自己的灵感；朋友們源源不断的佳作，如活水般润泽着心池。從而旷宽了自己的艺术視野，活跃了词笔，愉悦了生活！謝謝朋友們的诗词佳作！謝謝朋友們的艺术养分！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

昕阳一片
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Posted: 2010-12-29 21:37:17 Post subject:

佳作好评，引人入胜啊！问好各位版主老师！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-30 08:36:23 Post subject:

謝謝昕阳一片欣赏！让我們一起活跃生活，愉乐身心！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

河东阳升
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Posted: 2010-12-31 05:50:26 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

白云兄一大善举也！支持！在下那首《渔歌子》，还请兄多多指謬，谢谢!

篆字章这样漂亮
请问如何制作
谢谢
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河东阳升
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Posted: 2010-12-31 05:55:03 Post subject:

学习好贴好韵底问好白云闲人 _________________ 发表文学作品百万字，出版作品选集两部，连载发表长篇小说一部。 Blog: http://blog.sina.com.cn/660591yg366

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-12-31 09:28:30 Post subject:

謝謝河東阳升的欣赏与点评！祝新年快乐！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

山城子
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Posted: 2011-01-01 19:35:42 Post subject:

闲人不闲敲键赏篇风雅学问字里行间 ——祝新年快乐吉祥！！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-01-02 08:48:08 Post subject:

謝謝山城子的鼓励与诗篇！祝新年快乐！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-02 09:24:15 Post subject:

新年好

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-01-02 12:05:30 Post subject:

謝謝白水关心！新年快乐，万事如意！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2011-01-02 12:31:09 Post subject:

问好白云老师，祝新的一年吉祥如意

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-01-03 11:35:53 Post subject:

白水你真有艺术气质，对艺术的感觉、艺术的执着、艺术的追求都有一翻見解！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

杨海军
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Posted: 2011-01-06 02:00:44 Post subject:

学习了，谢谢。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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