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五律临屏偶书

连南河
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Posted: 2010-12-25 08:41:40 Post subject: 五律临屏偶书

五律临屏偶书－－白水为黄洋界老师回多伦多接风后续清风堤岸鹿，白水玉冰壶。墨下三分虎，毫雕五秒鱼。鸥轻云信步，鹤重雨留书。松鼠耀枫树，飞鹅俊马湖。 Dec. 25，2010，Hormish Garden of Toronto（南河书院）8:00 -11:00 am _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-12-25 13:05:29 Post subject:

南河文意捷，滚滚似灵渠。巧嵌友名，天衣无缝！祝圣诞快乐！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-12-25 13:23:24 Post subject:

妙语连珠，给人以淋漓之美。圣诞节快乐!

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Posted: 2010-12-26 04:11:45 Post subject:

墨下三分虎，毫雕五秒鱼。-------给人以无穷遐想。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2010-12-27 00:48:00 Post subject:

清风堤岸鹿，白水玉冰壶。墨下三分虎，毫雕五秒鱼。鸥轻云信步，鹤重雨留书。松鼠耀枫树，飞鹅俊马湖。问好老师！色彩分明；动静结合。学习欣赏！

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Posted: 2010-12-31 04:42:52 Post subject:

黄洋界写到: 南河文意捷，滚滚似灵渠。巧嵌友名，天衣无缝！祝圣诞快乐！谢谢黄老师的鼓励,祝新年快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2010-12-31 04:57:40 Post subject:

冰清写到: 妙语连珠，给人以淋漓之美。圣诞节快乐! 谢谢冰清老师赏评. 祝新年快乐! 临屏偶书,为学习交流所得;同音字的运用,仅作尝试. _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2010-12-31 05:14:05 Post subject:

胡恢宗写到: 墨下三分虎，毫雕五秒鱼。-------给人以无穷遐想。黄洋界老师的诗,画,书法都有很深的造诣. 问好胡兄, 祝新年快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2010-12-31 05:23:04 Post subject:

笑聊兄写到: 清风堤岸鹿，白水玉冰壶。墨下三分虎，毫雕五秒鱼。鸥轻云信步，鹤重雨留书。松鼠耀枫树，飞鹅俊马湖。问好老师！色彩分明；动静结合。学习欣赏！问好笑聊兄,网络时代,笑聊人生! 祝新年快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2010-12-31 12:14:16 Post subject:

新年快乐。

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Posted: 2011-01-06 15:51:56 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

五律临屏偶书
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清风堤岸鹿，
白水玉冰壶。
墨下三分虎，
毫雕五秒鱼。
鸥轻云信步，
鹤重雨留书。
松鼠耀枫树，
飞鹅俊马湖。

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