冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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 Posted: 2010-12-18 20:27:12 Post subject: 欢聚（3） |
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七绝 细听风吟
——有赠连南河
书院南河一俊才，
成身学问积芸台。
风吟听罢欢歌起，
好似春惊响震雷。
呵呵,南河,如果我没记错的话,
你是细听风吟的专家. 对吧! |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2010-12-19 08:28:44 Post subject: |
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| 老师好诗。细腻，生动 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2010-12-19 15:07:08 Post subject: |
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冰清好诗。欣賞！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-12-20 02:19:41 Post subject: |
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好似春惊响震雷。
好结！学习欣赏！问好冰清老师！ |
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连南河
秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008
Posts: 342
Location: Toronto
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| Posted: 2010-12-23 20:49:40 Post subject: |
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谢谢冰清老师赠诗!
白水流云枫聚才,
清风拂面筑高台.
笑聊湖畔千家庆,
圣诞烟花似震雷.
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一路雨丝一路风 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2010-12-24 04:32:06 Post subject: |
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| 连南河 wrote: |
谢谢冰清老师赠诗!
白水流云枫聚才,
清风拂面筑高台.
笑聊湖畔千门庆,
圣诞烟花似震雷.
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问好南河， 好诗好和。
小建议，“门”可否调换一个字, 比如“家” or whatever  |
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连南河
秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008
Posts: 342
Location: Toronto
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| Posted: 2010-12-24 06:39:03 Post subject: |
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"家"比"门"好!
问好白水,圣诞节快乐!
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一路雨丝一路风 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-12-24 18:12:10 Post subject: |
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| 祝朋友们，师友们圣诞快乐！ |
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