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				|  发表于: 2010-12-24 09:48:17    发表主题: Spring Coming Soon |   |  
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				| Spring Coming Soon 
 Buds are tantalized in the cold weather,
 Right now smiling in the garden window;
 I‘m searching the tip of CN Tower,
 Sight goes through the bank with golden willow.
 
 Groundhogs looking around message better,
 The host of land is talking to follow;
 Lilies are blooming show more to colour,
 Choosing white or pink, orange or yellow.
 
 Green grass gradually takes out ice cover,
 Mulberry at the place with long shadow;
 People are looking for getting more stronger,
 Clouds in sky who know how I can borrow.
 
 Spread wheat seeds in the field of Toronto,
 My eyes are opening to look dough phyllo.
 
 May 15,2010,Hormish Garden of Toronto 6:30 to 7:30am
 Revised,July 31,2010
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 一路雨丝一路风
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  发表于: 2010-12-27 09:08:38    发表主题: |   |  
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				| 很棒的意境。小建议,或许简洁语法和修辞会更好些。节日好 |  | 
	
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		| 连南河 秀才
 
 
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 来自: Toronto
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				|  发表于: 2011-02-06 06:34:28    发表主题: |   |  
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				| Thanks. 
 Happy Chines New Year!
 
 一种尝试
 诗之韵采用abab abab abab bb
 模拟唐之韵的“绝”或“律”
 
 五律  临屏偶书
 --白水为黄洋界老师回多伦多接风后续
 
 清风堤岸鹿,
 白水玉冰壶。
 墨下三分虎,
 毫雕五秒鱼。
 鸥轻云信步,
 鹤重雨留书。
 松鼠耀枫树,
 飞鹅俊马湖。
 
 Dec. 25,2010,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)8:00 -11:00 am
 
 Toronto Greetings(十四行)
 
 To Pro. Xu
 
 
 一晃五年多的时光挥手流去,
 诗意一般多伦多的田园山光;
 一条心中的故乡河随风带雨,
 枫叶飘飘的国土美丽而芬芳。
 
 乌龙江的水永远流趟的情愫,
 你的问候带来了无限的思量;
 金山湖的粼粼碧波清清如许,
 走过的岁月睡梦中晶莹透亮。
 
 真诚的字里行间游动的旋律,
 犹如那夜空白兰花淡淡馨香;
 春晖桥头那柳丝飞落的花絮,
 牵动安大略湖畔宽松的臂膀。
 
 噢!自由的人儿自由的遐想,
 噢!崇尚民主与和平的天堂。
 
 Feb. 14, 2010  Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)7:30-8:20 pm
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