笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-20 02:55:42 Post subject: 卜算子-咏梅 |
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裂土冷风吹,飞雪花蕾吐。
傲骨铮铮洒脱来,岂惧严寒苦。
无意去争宠,又见群芳妒。
不为名声为报春,且是平平处。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-20 08:43:16 Post subject: |
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托物言志,写出寒梅本色。欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-20 09:16:22 Post subject: |
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泼墨咏志!尽显:无意苦争春,只把春來报的情操。 _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-20 17:30:05 Post subject: |
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傲骨铮铮为报春,且是平平处。---咏物明志。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-20 17:40:30 Post subject: |
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无意去争宠,又见群芳妒。
不为名声为报春,且是平平处。
诗言志,欣赏。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-21 01:30:13 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
托物言志,写出寒梅本色。欣赏! |
谢谢黄老师点评,雅誉鼓励!问好老师! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-21 01:31:23 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
泼墨咏志!尽显:无意苦争春,只把春來报的情操。 |
谢谢老师点评鼓励!问好老师! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-21 01:32:44 Post subject: |
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胡恢宗 wrote: |
傲骨铮铮为报春,且是平平处。---咏物明志。 |
谢谢老师点评鼓励!问好。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-21 01:33:54 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
无意去争宠,又见群芳妒。
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谢谢白水雅誉鼓励!问好! |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-21 04:44:10 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
泼墨咏志!尽显:无意苦争春,只把春來报的情操。 |
欣赏佳作,赞成白云闲人老师的评点,问候笑聊老师。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-24 19:28:14 Post subject: |
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宁家珍 wrote: |
白云闲人 wrote: |
泼墨咏志!尽显:无意苦争春,只把春來报的情操。 |
欣赏佳作,赞成白云闲人老师的评点,问候笑聊老师。 |
谢谢宁家珍诗友鼓励!问好并祝圣诞快乐! |
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