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◎第一场雪
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PostPosted: 2010-12-16 19:39:53    Post subject: ◎第一场雪 Reply with quote

这场雪
是否来得早了些
在离虎尾三尺远的地方
衬托不出年关的险峻
作为一种快要灭绝的相思
不知还有没有续集

天气预报的单纯显而易见
它准确预言了诞生
却无法肯定雪下
俗世之痛的去日

打一个电话给远方
再一次提及关于温暖的定义
然后呼呼大睡
但我年幼的孩子却切夜难眠

无法说什么
沉默的注视应该更合适
这场雪的意义
也许就是对时间的又一条暗示
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PostPosted: 2010-12-16 22:22:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

天气预报的单纯显而易见
它准确预言了诞生
却无法肯定雪下
俗世之痛的去日
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 22:22:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

什么时候我能再一次体会第一场雪~~我能记起最后一场雪~~在我的感觉里~最后一场雪一下就是十几年~~从没停过~~
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PostPosted: 2010-12-22 17:24:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
天气预报的单纯显而易见
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问好白水!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-22 17:25:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
什么时候我能再一次体会第一场雪~~我能记起最后一场雪~~在我的感觉里~最后一场雪一下就是十几年~~从没停过~~


感谢来读,问好!
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