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黄淮
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PostPosted: 2010-12-15 03:51:32    Post subject: 表——以字为鉴2首 Reply with quote



里三层,外三层

层层包裹



外礼服,内胸衣

里外掩饰



统统剥去

暴露裸体



难说,那就是你

谁知,你在那里?





睁大眼睛向外搜寻

——看见了什么?



闭上眼睛向内探索

——发现了什么?



外面看见的
——里面有吗?



里面发现的

——外面有吗?

2010.8.26
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PostPosted: 2010-12-16 06:59:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

外面看见的
——里面有吗?



里面发现的

——外面有吗?

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PostPosted: 2010-12-16 14:40:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Razz
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 21:07:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,有意思啊!问好你! cup of wine
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PostPosted: 2010-12-21 03:20:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢二位关注!欣赏!致意!
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