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这条鱼坐在车里

听雨不闻风
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Joined: 16 Jan 2007
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Posted: 2010-12-09 22:56:40 Post subject: 这条鱼坐在车里

这条鱼坐在车里文/听雨不闻风一般不出门尤其是在晚上真不知夜的景致是这样的亮堂坐在车内看窗外的灯火明暗时如画一样车穿行在楼间让我想起电视中播出的海底世界我就象那海底的鱼在有景的夜色中游动不同于海里的是这条鱼是坐在车里 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/TYBWF xzbbsoxz@sina.com

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2010-12-10 04:45:05 Post subject:

这个类比有意思。整首诗轻松悠闲，很舒展。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2010-12-11 02:40:56 Post subject:

不同于海里的是这条鱼是坐在车里 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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