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《听雪》

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2007-03-05 07:06:25 Post subject: 《听雪》

《听雪》 ·赵福治洁白之上，想不到手可以这样张开。托起思绪晶莹和心路，漫天飞舞没有借口，古老的沿袭中雪有多老？无人而知我这样表述雪的时候，你正坐在梅里，听一朵花开

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2007-03-05 07:13:54 Post subject:

我这样表述雪的时候，你正坐在梅里，听一朵花开

丘陵
童生

Joined: 03 Mar 2007
Posts: 12
Location: 中国四川
丘陵Collection

Posted: 2007-03-05 17:27:05 Post subject:

雪有多老？无人而知赵版诗文字凝练含意丰厚令人反复沉吟甚多收获 _________________ 荷笠带斜阳青山独归远

冷巉
举人

Joined: 10 Mar 2007
Posts: 1106
Location: 中国十堰
冷巉Collection

Posted: 2007-04-03 08:34:47 Post subject:

看着好欣慰，读来好舒心。学习了~~~~~~~~~~` _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

刘雨萍
秀才

Joined: 25 Jan 2007
Posts: 226
Location: Houston, TX. U.S.A
刘雨萍Collection

Posted: 2007-04-03 10:55:03 Post subject:

喜欢赵兄如此精炼老道的思维和语言. 问好. _________________ 隔海抒情

王浥
童生

Joined: 11 Mar 2007
Posts: 55
Location: 中国广东肇庆
王浥Collection

Posted: 2007-04-03 17:36:27 Post subject:

洁白之上，想不到手可以这样张开。托起思绪晶莹和心路，漫天飞舞听雪赏梅诗意的人生 _________________ 诗如生活,生活是诗！５２６０２０中国广东肇庆端州六路芙蓉西一街１７号翠芙居７０５王晓辉

倾听书卷
童生

Joined: 26 Dec 2006
Posts: 49
Location: 江苏常熟
倾听书卷Collection

Posted: 2007-04-03 23:45:46 Post subject:

我这样表述雪的时候，你正坐在梅里，听一朵花开 ——欣赏听雪，问赵版好。 _________________ 联系地址: 215500 江苏省常熟市地方志办公室浦君芝

金金
进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
金金Collection

Posted: 2007-04-04 00:27:46 Post subject:

哲思而宽阔的心态，温暖而古老的情调。喜欢：）问好 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

司马策风
举人

Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 1211
Location: 温哥华
司马策风Collection

Posted: 2007-04-04 00:37:15 Post subject:

犹如一幅“梅雪争辉”的写意小品。有味问好赵兄 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2007-04-04 04:23:26 Post subject:

大家多批评。

寒丁
童生

Joined: 16 Mar 2007
Posts: 40

寒丁Collection

Posted: 2007-04-04 20:22:33 Post subject:

语言精练，思维独特，不错，学习，问好福治 _________________ 冷是另一种暖

三色堇
秀才

Joined: 25 Nov 2006
Posts: 148
Location: 西安
三色堇Collection

Posted: 2007-04-04 22:30:54 Post subject:

我这样表述雪的时候，你正坐在梅里，听一朵花开 ----------------------------------- 精妙的句子

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
韩少君Collection

Posted: 2007-04-18 14:21:56 Post subject: 好诗

喜欢:雪有多老 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection

Posted: 2007-04-18 15:47:19 Post subject:

意象空灵曼妙，好像真有临雪的感觉！！！好诗！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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