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《牵着红云彩》

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Posted: 2010-12-01 15:55:21 Post subject: 《牵着红云彩》

《牵着红云彩》你在大海的脊背上播种了无数朵浪花沿着海岸歌唱沙滩炫耀地披上了潮湿的外衣冥想着昨日的阳光和海鸟追逐着闪光的鱼群被涛声埋进了水草里起雾了在幽静的密林里你扯着灰白色的帷幕覆盖了恬静的清晨炊烟般地升起太阳在你的呼唤下醒来烘干了湿漉漉的心在它的光芒里你走出了沼泽地留一缕忧伤和莫名的痛你牵着红云彩看落日清洗那燃烧的晚霞 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2010-12-01 19:28:24 Post subject:

昨日的阳光和海鸟追逐着闪光的鱼群被涛声埋进了水草里很美的景色

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Posted: 2010-12-01 21:48:13 Post subject:

谢谢老师的点评。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

郭全华
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Posted: 2010-12-02 02:46:54 Post subject:

跟我的学生名字一样 _________________ 借助诗歌，努力把自己活成一棵树，白天向上，夜里向下．

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Posted: 2010-12-02 13:59:31 Post subject:

太阳在你的呼唤下醒来烘干了湿漉漉的心在它的光芒里你走出了沼泽地留一缕忧伤和莫名的痛欣赏这段描写，情，意，美俱佳！拜读！早安！

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Posted: 2010-12-02 18:40:11 Post subject:

谢谢各位老师的点评和关心，我会继续努力的。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-12-04 19:01:16 Post subject:

你牵着红云彩看落日清洗那燃烧的晚霞佳句！欣赏！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2010-12-05 00:46:13 Post subject:

谢谢老师的点评。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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