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Posted: 2010-12-04 20:09:53 Post subject: 吻

你的吻訴說著一種雨的形態濕漉漉的語言我聽不清楚只好教舌撥開妳雙唇如撥開一盞門簾走進去聽

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Posted: 2010-12-05 02:47:25 Post subject:

有趣。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2010-12-05 11:04:40 Post subject:

形象，生动

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-05 17:24:27 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

有趣。

杯中冲浪版主

我應該將濕漉漉的意象再往後延伸
個人覺得

金雄問好!

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-05 17:25:09 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

形象，生动

白水 Moonlight

感謝讀詩

金雄問好!

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