影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-01 05:19:26 Post subject: 七律•读简媜《以箭为翅》有怀(新韵) |
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七律•读简媜《以箭为翅》有怀(新韵)
冲天箭气皆成水,望海奔腾欲向东。
拍岸隳石终溅雪,抽丝化雨易随风。
流年远露递嬗外,问道晚云明灭中。
山亦前行河改路,蜿蜒曲项练长弓。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-01 08:27:42 Post subject: |
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山、水、云、雨,婉转抒怀! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2010-12-01 09:32:41 Post subject: |
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有气势! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-02 02:17:44 Post subject: |
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问好两位朋友 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-02 02:19:14 Post subject: |
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不错,好诗。 |
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