暗香如沁
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Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
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 Posted: 2007-04-03 09:02:46 Post subject: 卜算子.车站见打工者有记 |
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几见稚儿啼，未解风尘苦。屡唤爷娘亦去去：莫教儿无主。
一步一回头，泪撒离乡路。恰似民初恨点兵，未必轻如许。
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hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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| Posted: 2007-04-03 09:39:25 Post subject: |
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现实感强
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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kokho
进士出身
Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
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| Posted: 2007-04-03 10:13:35 Post subject: |
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支持 ：）
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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莹雪
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Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-04-03 18:29:48 Post subject: |
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| 感人肺腑，催人泪下。 |
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聽雲館主
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Joined: 03 Mar 2007
Posts: 361
Location: Canada
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問候暗香如沁詞長！拜讀了，感人至深！惟「屡唤爷娘亦去去」句出律，當為平結！
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壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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