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如果这还算一首诗歌，一定是仅仅为你而作

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杨海军
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Posted: 2010-11-27 15:06:05 Post subject:

我相信，这首诗是给大家写的！谢谢了 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2010-11-28 04:14:04 Post subject:

推窗，牵来一弯弦月弯弯如唇如莫愁湖畔载歌的渔舟弦乐声声谁人晓得唱和？可以作为歌词了。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2010-11-28 04:58:14 Post subject:

推窗，牵来一弯弦月弯弯如唇如莫愁湖畔载歌的渔舟天地日月尽在掌中，何尝不成佳作？！ _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

白水
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Posted: 2010-11-28 15:30:34 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

晴宝儿 wrote:

欣赏唱和，文字有让人说什么的欲望，文字也高兴。

宝儿，读朋友的和诗，我也高兴（想变蚊子了） Razz

一看这里高兴我更睡不着了
白水就是一个绝妙的wen zi，今年我回来写诗还是从白水亲的苹果开始，感谢亲。
北美枫是今年我上的第一个网站，94郁闷还没收到刊呢55
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我什么时候亲苹果了

anyway, 能把你的诗歌勾引出来也不错，得！我是蚊子，你是蜘蛛，这下我死定了 Very Happy

别55，找海军

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Posted: 2010-11-28 15:31:44 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

我相信，这首诗是给大家写的！谢谢了

问好海军

白水
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Posted: 2010-11-28 15:33:22 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

推窗，牵来一弯弦月
弯弯如唇
如莫愁湖畔载歌的渔舟
弦乐声声
谁人晓得唱和？

可以作为歌词了。

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冲浪好，等你谱曲

白水
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Posted: 2010-11-28 15:34:07 Post subject:

吟啸徐行 wrote:

推窗，牵来一弯弦月
弯弯如唇
如莫愁湖畔载歌的渔舟

天地日月尽在掌中，何尝不成佳作？！

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谢谢鼓励，问好

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-11-29 23:13:17 Post subject:

问好！远握！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2010-11-30 07:09:19 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

我什么时候亲苹果了 anyway, 能把你的诗歌勾引出来也不错，得！我是蚊子，你是蜘蛛，这下我死定了
别55，找海军 ...

笨,亲就是你,你就是亲.亲不一现代称呼吗,我也不道,大概是这样的,笑倒
找海军?嘛意思,他?保护蚊子协会的?
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白水
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Posted: 2010-11-30 15:00:52 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

问好！远握！

问好少君，很久没读到你的诗歌了。等

白水
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Posted: 2010-11-30 15:04:02 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

我什么时候亲苹果了 anyway, 能把你的诗歌勾引出来也不错，得！我是蚊子，你是蜘蛛，这下我死定了
别55，找海军 ...

笨,亲就是你,你就是亲.亲不一现代称呼吗,我也不道,大概是这样的,笑倒
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宝儿，你是非晕死我不可，不知道我是古墓里钻出来的吗？不懂现代 Wink

这不是让你找海军寄书吗 Smile

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Posted: 2010-12-05 07:16:34 Post subject:

富有感性和张力之作, 欣赏.

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2010-12-05 07:49:00 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

晴宝儿 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

我什么时候亲苹果了 anyway, 能把你的诗歌勾引出来也不错，得！我是蚊子，你是蜘蛛，这下我死定了
别55，找海军 ...

笨,亲就是你,你就是亲.亲不一现代称呼吗,我也不道,大概是这样的,笑倒
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宝儿，你是非晕死我不可，不知道我是古墓里钻出来的吗？不懂现代 Wink

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原来如此,笑晕,恩要,怎么着也得读读北美枫,还没见过它庐山面目呢,亲晚安 Smile

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