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【天空】---你的天空是什么颜色？
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 03:50:12    Post subject: 【天空】---你的天空是什么颜色？ Reply with quote
【天空】

我离不开土地
所以没有登过高山
没有指点江河的雄心壮志
目光最远处只有抬头仰望的天空

那时天空很蓝 云朵很轻 星星很亮
站在那棵老树下仰望，靠北那一片的
云朵和星星，都是我的
我每天都会去数，每天我的星星和云朵都比别人的多

那棵老树，听爸说
去年就死了
每当我越过树梢看头上的天空时
都会想起它
但这片天空 很重
很低，一团团的黄
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 05:28:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
读着挺舒服的~心情好的时候~我看到所有我爱的植物都是我的~
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 15:22:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
结尾很有重量。问候子花诗人
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 18:14:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
每当我越过树梢看头上的天空时
都会想起它
但这片天空 很重
很低，一团团的黄


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PostPosted: 2010-11-30 02:54:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
安红红 wrote:
读着挺舒服的~心情好的时候~我看到所有我爱的植物都是我的~

我也是，心情好的时候他们都像是我的爱人，心情不好的时候，他们更像我的亲人……
问好安红红
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PostPosted: 2010-11-30 02:58:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
结尾很有重量。问候子花诗人

问好杨大哥。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-30 03:03:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
每当我越过树梢看头上的天空时
...

也许是我自己的原因……
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