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天空外一首

十三瑾
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Posted: 2010-11-28 20:07:43 Post subject: 天空外一首

叫花子太阳底下数不清的乞丐怀揣鬼胎在东边的沙漠上晒太阳不胜数的水泡破灭向东而行的路途像一个谜语谁没猜中就与卖火柴的小女孩划火柴天空如果天空是一条河流雨水就是它抒情的种子街道上人烟全无天空让雨水日夜丰富

白水
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Posted: 2010-11-29 18:18:16 Post subject:

如果天空是一条河流雨水就是它抒情的种子形象，生动

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Posted: 2010-11-29 18:21:12 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如果天空是一条河流
雨水就是它抒情的种子

形象，生动

问好白水！谢谢来读哦！

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