东北诗弦
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當西風站在眼前的時候
遠山的楓葉都羞赧了
連帶著呼倫貝爾的草原
也披上了向日葵的顏色
梵高最高興不過了
終於枝上的烏鴉也啼了
爲什麽長得好好的
這次又像雪花的樣子
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-06-05 20:53:58 Post subject: |
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精致
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杨海军
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东北诗弦
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| Posted: 2010-11-28 03:56:48 Post subject: |
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谢过海军兄！
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晴宝儿
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| Posted: 2011-08-24 08:05:29 Post subject: |
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形象，跳跃，丰富。
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戀海
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| Posted: 2011-09-07 16:28:02 Post subject: |
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落葉
秋風起兮
我喜歡
這樣的蕭瑟氛圍
不是落寞
要帶起
新機
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东北诗弦
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| Posted: 2011-09-20 15:21:58 Post subject: |
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感謝道友的點評！
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