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迷路在你溫柔的城

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-11-25 06:11:56 Post subject: 迷路在你溫柔的城

走在你用意象、符號砌成的磚牆間字裡、行間築成的街道裡我樂意扮演一個初次進城的過客蓄意迷路在你浪漫如畫的城市一遍遍在你刻意安排的意象中輕敲每個字的門環靜聽從詩句中傳回得跫音縱然百轉千迴我已瞭若指掌這城怎沒有留住一宿的客棧期待一陣狂風驟雨讓我恣意有一直迷路的理由

白水
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Posted: 2010-11-25 16:00:06 Post subject:

人留，天也留

十三瑾
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Posted: 2010-11-25 16:36:38 Post subject:

浓郁的情感！

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2010-11-28 04:19:45 Post subject:

我樂意扮演一個初次進城的過客蓄意迷路在你浪漫如畫的城市 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2010-11-28 04:53:51 Post subject:

在别人营造的美好里沉醉，何尝不是一种快乐！ _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

戀海
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Posted: 2010-11-29 03:08:41 Post subject:

問好金雄兄一直很喜歡你乾淨的文字

安红红
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Posted: 2010-11-29 05:30:54 Post subject:

幸福的迷路~因为热爱~可以随时抵达~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-11-29 15:21:27 Post subject:

喜欢这首诗。问候诗人 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

十三瑾
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Posted: 2010-11-29 18:21:49 Post subject:

喜欢的一首！情感！

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-01 04:31:16 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

人留，天也留

白水詩友：

感謝讀詩並問好!

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-01 04:33:37 Post subject:

十三瑾 wrote:

浓郁的情感！

十三瑾詩友：

感謝讀詩

金雄問好!

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-01 04:34:04 Post subject:

十三瑾 wrote:

浓郁的情感！

十三瑾詩友：

感謝讀詩

金雄問好!

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-01 04:41:16 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

我樂意扮演一個初次進城的過客
蓄意迷路
在你浪漫如畫的城市

杯中冲浪版主

一首值得迷戀的好詩
是值得一讀再讀的
金雄努力中

金雄問好~!

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-01 04:45:07 Post subject:

吟啸徐行 wrote:

在别人营造的美好里沉醉，何尝不是一种快乐！

吟啸徐行詩友：

讀洛夫、向明等人的詩
對我就是一種快樂
享受!

金雄問好!

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-01 04:52:32 Post subject:

戀海 wrote:

問好金雄兄

一直很喜歡你乾淨的文字

戀海兄：

好久沒到東海岸看海
是我們愈來愈忙嗎?
還是越來越不懂"生活"?

金雄問候!

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-01 04:56:22 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

幸福的迷路~因为热爱~可以随时抵达~~

安红红版主：

迷路
沒有方向有時候也可以是一種幸福

金雄問好!

劉金雄
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Posted: 2010-12-01 04:58:09 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

喜欢这首诗。问候诗人

杨海军詩友

感謝讀詩

金雄問好並學習!

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