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想流浪 外一首
十三瑾
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PostPosted: 2010-11-25 16:35:06    Post subject: 想流浪 外一首 Reply with quote
想流浪

患青春期综合症的河流里
不安分的游鱼
一顶帽子就可以反抗太阳
格桑开在前方
诱惑的牙齿咬断你
梦里的缰绳
天高皇帝远的地方
唱一支歌到天亮


堵车

这间教室太小了
小得孩子们
只能挤在一起
让喇叭尖锐
纪律委员的口哨
吹响后
也只能安静一点点
我坐在椅子上
没有说什么
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PostPosted: 2010-11-25 17:04:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
患青春期综合症

形象思维
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十三瑾
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PostPosted: 2010-11-25 20:09:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
患青春期综合症

形象思维


问好朋友！谢谢来读！
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北夫
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PostPosted: 2010-11-25 20:48:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
堵车

这间教室太小了
小得孩子们
只能挤在一起
让喇叭尖锐
纪律委员的口哨
吹响后
也只能安静一点点
我坐在椅子上
没有说什么

这首诗好。让我们过一把童年的瘾。
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十三瑾
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PostPosted: 2010-11-25 21:01:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
北夫 wrote:
堵车
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哈哈，谢谢北夫来读！祝安！
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PostPosted: 2010-11-27 04:34:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
一顶帽子就可以反抗太阳
格桑开在前方
诱惑的牙齿咬断你
梦里的缰绳
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2010-11-27 15:11:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
楼上的诗人们都很有诗才
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十三瑾
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PostPosted: 2010-11-28 05:15:31    Post subject: 哈哈 Reply with quote
胡礼忠 wrote:
一顶帽子就可以反抗太阳
格桑开在前方
诱惑的牙齿咬断你
梦里的缰绳


哈哈，礼尚往来!问好朋友！
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十三瑾
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PostPosted: 2010-11-28 05:17:29    Post subject: 问 Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
楼上的诗人们都很有诗才

问好海军！
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