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珠海航览
胡恢宗
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PostPosted: 2010-11-23 01:14:00    Post subject: 珠海航览 Reply with quote

珠海航览

飞天舒袖伞衔花,歼十枭龙弄彩霞。
祈愿和谐弭战火,永教蓝空绽奇葩。
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水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞
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PostPosted: 2010-11-23 07:44:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

世界和谐消战乱,地球處處绽奇葩!
胡恢宗,〝珠海航展〞是世界航展还是中国航展呢?
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PostPosted: 2010-11-23 19:31:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

珠海航览是世界航览。我只是在电视上看到空中表演,似乎看到了军备竞赛。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-24 00:00:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

结句失律,感谢白云老师提醒。现改为:蓝空民用绽奇葩。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-24 07:49:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

胡恢宗,不用客气,相互交流乐趣多多!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-24 09:26:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

但愿科技用于和平发展,世界享太平。
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