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仙居里的火铺
胡礼忠
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PostPosted: 2010-11-14 07:21:12    Post subject: 仙居里的火铺 Reply with quote

仙居里的火铺

胡礼忠


把火放在季节里
剪裁成方块
火焰就从方块中冒出来
回来 我什么也没想
火铺上锅子 鼎罐
油腻腻看着我
我想 大山里
火铺该长了几百年

进入火铺 就去了软酥的温泽
每天的日子 就
变成了绕指柔样的铁
想起挂念一生的火铺
上炕时童年 下炕时接近黄昏
火铺都在我心中旺起来
伸出温暖的手足拥抱

犬吠吵对雪花 也听到火长出火铺的声音


哺育过我的山寨
年年岁岁烧起了我的情感
我心中听到了火笑 和
众人捧柴愉悅的姿式
在山峦的重重包围中
山民们正带着火焰突围篝火
狂欢的舞蹈让山也动起来

我说了 会让你入迷
布满山寨让你动情的圣火
我说了 你会记住
闪烁在黑夜里的疔疤
那种实实在在 给了山民
窜出的暖与痛
火的眼睛 岂止留予瓦垄

喜鹊帮忙翻开暖暖的日历
让你沉醉在 老树蔸
敞开嗓子的笑 和久远
木质芬芳故事燃成的动人夜话
火 让满寨子的夜晚动起来
让麻木在生活中的赤足者
在上山 下山的小径上醒悟

小径边 巴王草这种顽强的植物

象路烛烧起来 灯火在寨子里烧起来
红红火火的日子从火铺站出来
伸臂拉出满弓的月辉 收割
瓦轮上面的炊烟 及
仙居里五谷纯粮的香醇
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圆月巴钟
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PostPosted: 2010-11-15 16:40:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗歌!妙
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PostPosted: 2010-11-15 16:54:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有特质的诗歌,学习了
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胡礼忠
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PostPosted: 2010-11-16 02:12:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢老师、蒙您抬举、问好!
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菩虔
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PostPosted: 2010-11-19 18:32:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

我心中听到了火笑 和
众人捧柴愉悅的姿式
在山峦的重重包围中
山民们正带着火焰突围篝火
狂欢的舞蹈让山也动起来
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禅心诗润,觅尽好诗、参悟人性之大美
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PostPosted: 2010-11-21 19:43:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

奇特的火铺,火铺是哪里的方言么
问好。
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胡礼忠
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PostPosted: 2010-11-22 03:28:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢宝儿才女光临!火铺是土家族木楼内烤火接客的地方,在我北美枫博客上有图片。
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