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千古佛灯话中秋
胡礼忠
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Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2010-11-14 07:15:16    Post subject: 千古佛灯话中秋 Reply with quote

千古佛灯话中秋



胡礼忠







今夜仰望星空 来自

浩宇的声音交汇

村庄里群居寂寥的神

让神谕在荒芜的草茎上漂泊

若鸿的风际中 多少村庄的旧事

幽灵托附的的声音亲切

天人同叙的月融 那若

秋深里柴薪的乡愁

是否等待 雕刻傩神的面具



故土村庄的胃 硕大而保守

消化着玉米 杂粮 薯类 瓜果与爱情

滋润着摸秋的族人们 盼望

月光比镰锋厉 今夜

那么多蓬勃向月的植物与庄稼

今夜在山里不来几碗 不算男人

我知道 村庄即使醉得东倒西歪

那喷溅火焰的秋天清醒着

那刀子样烈的玉米酒

那刀子般嘴豆腐心样的山里女人

今夜这月下注定浪漫和有花绽开



残阳的酒浆 酝酿千秋娇宠的月

让我们拥有了 拜月的情节

在现世燃起篝火

让我们在阳光的侧面 吟唱

生死大悲大乐狂欢的歌子

从童年就知晓能打开天门的中秋

就知道月亮阴柔大美的

玉兔 嫦娥 和那樵夫砍不倒下的神树的传说

我如约而来 从童年踱到今夜

秋风催我带上诗酒 备好雕鞍

带上村庄的牛羊和虫鸣迎送女神

让千古佛灯不灭 也为了祭祀

在遥远而静谧的爱情森林 那

坎坎伐檀不止的英雄
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2010-11-15 14:55:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

又古典又现代,又抒情又乡村。
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圆月巴钟
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PostPosted: 2010-11-15 16:38:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗歌!
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我喜欢欣赏经典诗歌,并沉溺于经典给予我永久的快乐。
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胡礼忠
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PostPosted: 2010-11-16 02:08:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢周老师雅评!您功底深厚、佩服!
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真诚结交诗友、文友;访良师益友于江湖五岳,其乐融融、止心若此!来而不往非礼也!
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菩虔
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Joined: 19 Nov 2010
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PostPosted: 2010-11-19 18:31:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

村庄里群居寂寥的神

让神谕在荒芜的草茎上漂泊

若鸿的风际中 多少村庄的旧事

幽灵托附的的声音亲切

天人同叙的月融 那若

秋深里柴薪的乡愁

是否等待 雕刻傩神的面具
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禅心诗润,觅尽好诗、参悟人性之大美
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晴宝儿
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PostPosted: 2010-11-21 20:01:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

我如约而来 从童年踱到今夜

这句真令人喜爱,轻快中又见时光的行囊和岁月的感慨。
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