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芝麻女
山城子
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PostPosted: 2010-11-01 23:01:42    Post subject: 芝麻女 Reply with quote

芝麻女
——金阳的“思美”小店
文/ 山城子

1、
比之跟前的“华联”西瓜
这家“思美”就是一粒最小的北方芝麻
芝麻开门,一个芝麻女
时髦而漂漂亮亮地安于收银台前
眼睛盯着门外游来游去的男女鱼儿
进来“咬钩”是她唯一的期盼


2、
笑容掩藏着枯燥的过去
她曾二十五年锈在一家大型国企
一个无足轻重的螺丝钉
六年的摇把苦累十九年的科室委屈
再不出去一生就毁了
她决心绝然地决定一回自己


3、
彼时无聊打毛衣闭门防领导也烦
大好的青春年华只能在无奈中郁郁排遣
此刻她自己出货背着扛着自己搬运
腰酸腿疼碎步跑着也绽蕾一样意态香甜
人们呀!何妨换一种活法
就像伏叶的青虫蜕变成蝴蝶恣然翩然


4、
门侧那一整面只能装下一个广告
大于真人的女人优雅地美享着内衣胸罩
斗室里只一架两米的十数件的商品展示
价位都是厂家让利后而不许改变的钉牢
持有贵宾卡的进来从不问价
问价的只能接受芝麻女耐心的语言与微笑


5、
差一周就开张三个月了
收入远比预期的宁愿赔一年房租要好
去了水电运输乱码七着的费用
起步的效益比先前一脚踢不倒的工资美妙
我说,这我就放心了,我的芝麻女儿
老爸祝你芝麻开花节节高嘿嘿节节高

2010-11-2
写于黔中平坝夏云镇

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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2010-11-03 23:37:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

深情写现实,心喜夸乖女1
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PostPosted: 2010-11-04 18:35:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
深情写现实,心喜夸乖女1



谢谢道模留字!!!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-04 19:52:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,诗句中浓浓的爱意。温馨幸福。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-08 17:03:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢子在川上曰朋友!!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-09 11:23:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

老师好幸福 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-11-10 18:55:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
老师好幸福 Very Happy


照我没退休的日子比——特识足啊!
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