影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2010-11-10 02:59:33 Post subject: 七律•立冬次韵紫石金麟 |
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七律•立冬次韵紫石金麟
紫日凝霜焉独去，雁红背晚入心舟。
汀河浅落禁霞洗，卵石浮升望水流。
风下荻花空与扇，云游沧海月当楼。
梦奔浪涌前朝事，又是经年失晚秋。
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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| Posted: 2010-11-10 03:53:56 Post subject: |
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梦奔浪涌前朝事，又是经年失晚秋。
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-11-10 09:05:40 Post subject: |
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人間正道是沧桑，浮沉起落梦如烟!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2010-11-10 13:14:51 Post subject: |
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二三联,韵味十足。欣赏！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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影沉寒水
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Joined: 16 Feb 2010
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| Posted: 2010-11-11 05:34:26 Post subject: |
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问好老朋友们
谢阅
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