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水色山光

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-11-05 15:33:29 Post subject:

生查子 - 水色山光碧流绕城東，翠嶺迎窗景。芳树荫园庭，霞彩晨昏映。喜听莺鳥鳴，挥筆酣诗咏。水色涤尘心，山光悦情性! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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Posted: 2010-11-06 01:27:05 Post subject:

问好老师！碧流绕城東，翠嶺迎窗景。芳树荫园庭，霞彩晨昏映。喜听莺鳥鳴，挥筆酣诗咏。水色涤尘心，山光悦情性! 读老师词，感觉人被山水融化，还是人融入山水也说不清了。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-11-06 08:16:10 Post subject:

笑聊,是人与山水相互融和呢! 为什么我喜欢咏赋山水诗词呢! 就是希望把自己的情感与山水的灵气融和,更好地愉悦人生! 让水色涤尘心、山光悦情性! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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Posted: 2010-11-06 18:14:47 Post subject:

"山水悦情性",人阅山水,山水悦人. 白云兄深有体察啊! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

冰清Collection

Posted: 2010-11-06 19:53:52 Post subject:

无凡俗之心，名利之念：白云兄修养到家了。 “喜听莺鳥鳴，挥筆酣诗咏。水色涤尘心，山光悦情性”，真可谓无意嵌镶见玲珑。读来倍感亲切!

胡恢宗
秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008
Posts: 564

胡恢宗Collection

Posted: 2010-11-07 01:35:47 Post subject:

情纵金风里，丹枫醉彩霞。儿时红叶戏，慈母梦中夸。毎个人都有一个金色的童年，虽然可忆不可及，但回忆也是一种幸福。十一月份以前的作品都找不到了，不知该如何找，可否指点我一下。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

影沉寒水
举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
影沉寒水Collection

Posted: 2010-11-07 03:30:52 Post subject:

确实是水色山光 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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Posted: 2010-11-07 05:27:53 Post subject:

水色涤尘心，山光悦情性! 人爱自然，自然爱人。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-11-07 08:20:52 Post subject:

黄兄,每每归纳性很强:〝人阅山水,山水悦人〞! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

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Posted: 2010-11-07 08:24:41 Post subject:

謝冰清鼓励! 水色涤尘心,山光悦情性 - 是出自内心的感慨呢! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-11-07 08:33:32 Post subject:

胡恢宗,你点击一下〝胡恢宗文集〞,便可以查到了.你试试看. _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-11-07 08:35:49 Post subject:

謝影沉寒水欣赏! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-11-07 08:39:29 Post subject:

庆宏说得好:人爱自然,自然爱人! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

冰清Collection

Posted: 2010-11-07 21:04:24 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

无凡俗之心，名利之念：白云兄修养到家了。
“喜听莺鳥鳴，挥筆酣诗咏。水色涤尘心，山光悦情性”，
真可谓无意嵌镶见玲珑。读来倍感亲切!
...

白云闲人 wrote:

謝冰清鼓励!
水色涤尘心,山光悦情性 - 是出自内心的感慨呢!

是的，我欣赏的正是你诗歌中流露出的心尘内净。
“读之倍感亲切”——词的下片无意中镶嵌了一位友人的名字。 Laughing

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-11-08 08:14:38 Post subject:

謝謝冰清的再次鼓励! 我咏赋诗词,主要是希望透過舒发自己情怀,达到愉悦人生的目的.寻找一条通向自娱自乐的路径. 冰清,真的那么巧:在该詞下片中,无意镶嵌了哪位朋友的大名呢? _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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