影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-07 03:31:10 Post subject: 五古•杂思 |
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五古•杂思
深秋水云淡,谁吟自在谣?
不留红叶坳,行脚过城桥。
雁去乡心里,月出故地娇。
自从离别后,三年桂影销。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2010-11-07 05:21:44 Post subject: |
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雁去乡心里,月出故地娇。
好意境。有杜甫“露从今夜白,月是故乡明。”之意。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-07 08:16:55 Post subject: |
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与庆宏同感! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-07 21:11:29 Post subject: |
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情思深婉! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-08 04:11:22 Post subject: |
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谢谢三位师友来读
遥问候 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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