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桑拿
东方朔南
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Joined: 19 Oct 2010
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Location: 中国.沈阳
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PostPosted: 2010-11-04 03:48:20    Post subject: 桑拿 Reply with quote

桑拿


作者:东方朔南



桑拿
舒筋活络后
让神经
发麻

纤纤十指
轻揉
把层层衣冠
扒下

绵绵乳峰
微颤
摇动广厦

红色的徽章啊
在汽浪中
氧化





2007.03.19
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William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Location: 中国四川广汉
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PostPosted: 2010-11-08 23:33:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

东方还是享受过的嘛,写得生动。
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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东方朔南
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PostPosted: 2010-11-09 02:22:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

我的周兄啊,不瞒你说,

真的是去过的人在我面前夸口的......实际要比这是“丰富”!

谢谢提读!
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子花
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PostPosted: 2010-11-09 04:05:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

衣冠
二字恰到好处的镶在“腰上”。学习!
兄台宝刀未老,佩服!
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