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秋日友聚

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Posted: 2010-11-02 08:22:28 Post subject: 秋日友聚

秋日友聚秋色浓，聚白宫。诗词友，喜相逢。白宫----白水之宫。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-11-02 08:27:14 Post subject:

庆宏的精练诗篇, 妙! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-11-02 08:53:16 Post subject:

再谢庆宏盛情! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2010-11-02 09:50:53 Post subject:

哈，我家又由白公馆变美国总统府了

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Posted: 2010-11-02 13:44:06 Post subject:

此白宫非彼白宫，白水之宫当然应该叫白宫。白公馆有牢狱之嫌，还是叫白宫好。

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Posted: 2010-11-02 13:46:39 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

庆宏的精练诗篇, 妙!

真希望白云老师能来加东参加我们的聚会。白云老师如方便来多伦多，请一定通知我们！

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Posted: 2010-11-02 13:48:09 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

再谢庆宏盛情!

多谢黄老师的墨宝！希望今后能向黄老师请教。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-03 04:26:12 Post subject:

言虽简，内涵深；新朋聚，情感真。问好庆宏兄！

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Posted: 2010-11-03 06:45:41 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏的盛情! 深深致谢!! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-11-03 09:56:15 Post subject:

秋色浓，聚白宫。风趣，更添喜庆!

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Posted: 2010-11-03 14:57:02 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

秋色浓，聚白宫。

风趣，更添喜庆!

谢谢冰清老师雅赏！

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Posted: 2010-11-03 15:02:05 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

言虽简，内涵深；新朋聚，情感真。

问好庆宏兄！

谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！真希望你能和我们也相聚在一起。

这次我尝试用尽量少的字来写，反映时间，地点，人物和情节：

秋色浓-----时间；
聚白宫-----地点；
诗词友-----人物；
喜相逢-----情节。

共用了12字。

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Posted: 2010-11-03 17:25:55 Post subject:

庆宏,好诗! 秋聚抒妙语, 字简寓意豐. 短短十二字, 玲珑畅思衷! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-11-04 04:04:30 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

言虽简，内涵深；新朋聚，情感真。

问好庆宏兄！

谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！真希望你能和我们也相聚在一起。
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庆宏兄，真的很羡慕！也希望有相聚的一天，想见见各位老师和兄弟。

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Posted: 2010-11-04 08:18:55 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

庆宏,好诗!

秋聚抒妙语,
字简寓意豐.
短短十二字,
玲珑畅思衷!

谢谢白云老师和诗鼓励！

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