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绝句-咏秋叶

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-01 01:29:15 Post subject: 绝句-咏秋叶

文/笑聊绝句咏秋叶和冰清老师《风中秋叶》一番新绿再从头，化作浓春满目幽。不息生生繁衍始，长河滚滚巧为舟。附冰清老师原玉：风中秋叶（2） --依韵和笑聊君秋叶风当才笔兴秋秋，画采回旋竞自由。此去别居无憾怨，一番新绿再从头。

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2010-11-01 03:57:07 Post subject:

落叶共春秋代谢 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-11-01 06:54:58 Post subject:

唱和俱皆! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-02 03:02:03 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

落叶共春秋代谢

谢寒水兄赏评。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-02 03:04:57 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

唱和俱皆!

谢白云老师评点！

米运刚
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Posted: 2010-11-02 03:15:42 Post subject:

“不息生生繁衍始，长河滚滚巧为舟。”妙句，欣赏！唱和俱佳，小弟学习！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-02 03:28:28 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

“不息生生繁衍始，长河滚滚巧为舟。”妙句，欣赏！唱和俱佳，小弟学习！

谢米兄雅评鼓励！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-11-02 04:41:58 Post subject:

接冰清"一番新绿再从头"句, 引出"化作浓春满目幽",妙句天成! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-03 04:20:58 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

接冰清"一番新绿再从头"句,
...

谢谢黄老师雅评鼓励！

冰清
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Posted: 2010-11-03 10:00:26 Post subject:

谢笑聊君和诗。生生不息。真好!

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-04 03:47:09 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

谢笑聊君和诗。

生生不息。真好!

谢谢冰清老师点评鼓励！

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