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《四季诗人》
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PostPosted: 2010-10-30 02:40:04    Post subject: 《四季诗人》 Reply with quote

《四季诗人》
在时光沉淀的枯枝上

嫩绿倔强地伸出了头

你背着拥挤的稻谷 行走在

铁犁的后面 蜗居在

大地的身上



绚丽的阳光 掀开

了五彩的花瓣 你

赶着绿色的憧憬 在

麦芒上徘徊 细数着

滚滚的麦浪



花落果红的声音 惊醒

了山庄 在枯瘦的颈蔓上

你用闪闪的刀光 串起了

灿烂的芳香和

喜悦的飞翔



静静的小河 穿上

了洁白的衣裳 停止了

歌唱 渺渺的炊烟点燃

了晚霞 把大地的背影拉长

夜色也悄悄地把你

的青丝染上了月光
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PostPosted: 2010-10-30 05:24:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言也飘逸,但立意没有出新。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-30 15:01:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师。
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