胡恢宗
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 Posted: 2010-10-30 00:41:09 Post subject: 卜算子 · 呼唤 |
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卜算子 · 呼唤
读笑聊兄《卜算子 · 呼唤》奉和
常忆约黄昏，月上梢头柳。夜洒清晖倩影随，俩俩依偎久。
劳燕苦分飞，鱼雁何曾有。梦入银河鹊岸间，声竭频招手。
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-10-30 03:36:45 Post subject: |
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| 胡兄妙化古句成新词，学习欣赏！ |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-10-30 04:54:45 Post subject: |
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| 谢胡兄和词！学习欣赏。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-10-30 08:47:26 Post subject: |
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月上柳梢头,人约黄昏后.梦縈鹊桥边,情深随笔走!
好词!
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2010-10-30 09:49:47 Post subject: |
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思念之深,之切,溢于言表.
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2010-10-30 17:43:46 Post subject: |
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感谢诗友错爱。白云兄以诗代评，更是受益匪浅，谢了。
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