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风中秋叶（2）
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PostPosted: 2010-10-29 08:47:32    Post subject: 风中秋叶（2） Reply with quote
风中秋叶（2）
--依韵和笑聊君 秋叶

风当才笔兴秋秋，画采回旋竞自由。
此去别居无憾怨，一番新绿再从头。


录笑聊君和作：
读《风中秋叶(1)》感慨良多并和：
吟诗不必尽言愁，硕果盈枝满是秋。
莫管今朝多少事，且将郁闷付东流。
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-10-29 16:05:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
一番新綠再从头 --- 回味悠悠!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-10-29 16:16:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
"此去别居无憾怨,一番新绿再从头"
毫无伤秋之感,确显生机勃勃昂扬之气!
"新绿"一词用在这里特好!
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-10-29 18:11:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好冰清老师!
结句:一番新绿再从头。 有新意,积极向上!学习了.

谢谢和诗!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-29 18:42:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
秋叶风中去，明春新绿来。

生生不息，青春常在。冰清老师好意境！
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PostPosted: 2010-10-29 19:18:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
七绝 秋叶（二）

满山秋叶任风吹，惬意随心自在飞。
曾有参天高树志，浪迹沧海不思归。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-29 21:58:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
一番新绿再从头。情志高远，回味无穷。学习了。
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米运刚
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PostPosted: 2010-10-31 22:52:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏冰清先生大作，好个“一番新绿再从头”。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-11-01 01:25:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好冰清老师！再读大作，震撼依然。兴致赋诗：

《绝句咏秋叶》

一番新绿再从头，化作浓春满目幽。
不息生生繁衍始，长河滚滚巧为舟。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-01 10:11:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢楼上几位朋友。
别称老师啊，还是直呼其名亲切。
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