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白云红叶

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-10-28 14:40:08 Post subject:

浪淘沙 - 白云红叶烟光霞彩染平畴，山色空濛俏帶羞。一点灵犀舒锦绣，白云红叶两优悠！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection

Posted: 2010-10-28 16:58:47 Post subject:

白云红叶两悠然,仁兄此时胜似仙! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

胡恢宗
秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008
Posts: 564

胡恢宗Collection

Posted: 2010-10-28 18:35:38 Post subject:

烟光霞彩灵犀通，白云红叶两悠悠。真是人入仙境，其乐无穷。我也陶醉了。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection

Posted: 2010-10-29 03:41:34 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

浪淘沙 - 白云红叶
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问好白云老师！绝句顺接：

白云红叶两悠悠，秋晚登高尽远眸。
不欲飞仙天界去，但求人世尽兴游。

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2010-10-29 04:02:59 Post subject:

白云红叶，天上人间。好意境，好心情。

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

冰清Collection

Posted: 2010-10-29 06:15:48 Post subject:

俏帶羞---独特的感受。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-10-29 07:04:04 Post subject:

黄兄,真的,人在画图中,飘然逸如仙! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-10-29 07:08:28 Post subject:

謝胡恢宗欣赏! 陶醉入仙境,暢意乐无穷! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-10-29 07:10:26 Post subject:

謝笑聊和诗! 登高宜眺远,尘旅尽兴游! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-10-29 07:11:47 Post subject:

謝庆宏赏评! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-10-29 07:19:20 Post subject:

謝冰清点评! 烟靄飘渺中,群山如披上面纱般娇俏; 山中红楓更俏红得帶羞! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

宁家珍
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Joined: 20 May 2009
Posts: 470
Location: 中国黄山
宁家珍Collection

Posted: 2010-10-31 22:45:20 Post subject:

烟光霞彩染平畴，山色空濛俏帶羞。一点灵犀舒锦绣，白云红叶两优悠！欣赏精彩词作，问候白云老师。

米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
米运刚Collection

Posted: 2010-10-31 22:49:34 Post subject:

“白云红叶两优悠！”白云、红叶，色彩鲜明，均有高亮旷寂之美。欣赏白云兄大作！问好！

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-11-01 06:49:36 Post subject:

謝謝宁家珍欣赏! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-11-01 06:52:20 Post subject:

謝运刚点评! 白云红叶,均有悠然自得之美! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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