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PostPosted: 2007-04-01 09:13:32    Post subject: [原创多读诗歌] 留驻  Reply with quote



。       留驻
。            kokho 2/4/2007

。  彻底的享受  乔丹在空中停留
。    再璀璨  夜空的烟花 叫刹哪
。     萍聚  是无根 无法跟随的美丽
。  旋律和听众  最爱发生无数 忠贞不算数
。   挥手的美  是最诚实的感觉
。    不管是再见或了

。  乔丹的时空  是整代人从篮球里泄不出来的感觉


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PostPosted: 2007-04-01 11:13:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

是整代人从篮球里泄不出来的感觉

很有特色的排列
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PostPosted: 2007-04-02 00:12:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢 和平岛 的指点
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PostPosted: 2007-04-02 00:15:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

这样的排列 是让 左右的句子 能够交叉 形成新的诗句 ;)

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PostPosted: 2007-04-02 11:09:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

我写这首,因为一首歌 

北风是你最后给我的拥抱 赵鹏



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PostPosted: 2007-04-02 17:13:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

魅力的诗, 歌.
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PostPosted: 2007-04-02 23:41:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

需要仔细解读的诗歌,问好kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-04-03 10:27:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
魅力的诗, 歌.


谢谢白水。。。


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PostPosted: 2007-04-03 10:28:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨光 wrote:
需要仔细解读的诗歌,问好kokho


杨光要多来呀。。。 看到你很高兴

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PostPosted: 2007-04-03 10:48:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

好一个"低音炮". 好久没听国语歌曲, 我都落伍了. 谢谢贴在这里的诗与歌.问好KOKHO
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PostPosted: 2007-04-03 23:20:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

给 刘雨萍 回好 :))

多来听歌 。。。


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PostPosted: 2007-09-08 18:37:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

今天学习这一首,远握。
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