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题图卜算子-呼唤

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Posted: 2010-10-21 04:12:50 Post subject: 题图卜算子-呼唤

（原创）题图卜算子-呼唤文/笑聊临屏和上一首题图《卜算子-呼唤》：极目望天边，浪滚涛声旧。鸥逐白帆水击船，共饮同心酒。转眼几何年，两鬓经霜后。阵阵心头呼唤伊，再盼能牵手！附张挥兄原玉：诉衷情。望海涛声依旧岸岩嵬，天海望帆归。滩头礁石凌乱，犹往事，不堪堆。风乍起，海鸥飞，泪巾挥。浪尖开绽，岁暮寒梅，白发频催。可惜图传不上来

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Posted: 2010-10-21 06:15:47 Post subject:

共飲同心酒,再盼能牵手. 深情的呼唤! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-10-21 20:16:01 Post subject:

共饮同心酒。再盼能牵手！

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Posted: 2010-10-22 02:30:29 Post subject:

阵阵心头呼唤定能牵手 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-10-22 04:32:48 Post subject:

笑聊卜算子，放翁钗头凤。情真意切。

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Posted: 2010-10-22 22:06:02 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

共飲同心酒,再盼能牵手. 深情的呼唤!

问好白云兄！因身体原因，故迟复致歉！

谢谢白云兄欣赏、点评鼓励！深深呼唤，向往追求！

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Posted: 2010-10-22 22:07:38 Post subject:

林芳萍 wrote:

共饮同心酒。
再盼能牵手！

谢谢林芳萍朋友提读！问好！

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Posted: 2010-10-22 22:09:48 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

阵阵心头呼唤

定能牵手

问好！那是一种追求、一种向往。

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Posted: 2010-10-22 22:19:25 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊卜算子，放翁钗头凤。情真意切。

问好庆宏兄！谢谢赞誉（呵呵，庆宏兄过誉了。不敢和放翁同列）只是把心中的追求演绎成文字。情真意切到是真的。

身体原因，迟复了。

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Posted: 2010-10-23 04:35:10 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊卜算子，放翁钗头凤。情真意切。

问好庆宏兄！谢谢赞誉（呵呵，庆宏兄过誉了。不敢和放翁同列）只是把心中的追求演绎成文字。情真意切到是真的。
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笑聊兄身体有恙？祝早日康复。多保重！

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Posted: 2010-10-23 07:33:28 Post subject:

笑聊,身体怎样啦? 注意劳逸结合,既要努力創业,又要注意保重,有好的身体状态,才能創出事业高峰! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-10-23 07:47:13 Post subject:

"心头呼唤伊,再盼能牵手"! 笑聊,"把心中的追求演译成文字",很好!! 人,要善于疏导自己的感情,不要困屈在心里,影响身心的健康,咏赋诗词是一种理想的方法! 笑聊,你做得好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-10-23 17:13:07 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊卜算子，放翁钗头凤。情真意切。

问好庆宏兄！谢谢赞誉（呵呵，庆宏兄过誉了。不敢和放翁同列）只是把心中的追求演绎成文字。情真意切到是真的。
...

笑聊兄身体有恙？祝早日康复。多保重！

谢谢庆宏兄关怀！准备下月中旬住院治疗。

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Posted: 2010-10-23 17:18:10 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

笑聊,身体怎样啦? 注意劳逸结合,既要努力創业,又要注意保重,有好的身体状态,才能創出事业高峰!

谢谢白云兄关爱！这次体检，查出些问题，必须尽早住院治疗。

白云兄说的对，身体才是本钱哦。

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Posted: 2010-10-23 17:34:44 Post subject:

笑聊保重身体! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-10-23 17:57:36 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊卜算子，放翁钗头凤。情真意切。

问好庆宏兄！谢谢赞誉（呵呵，庆宏兄过誉了。不敢和放翁同列）只是把心中的追求演绎成文字。情真意切到是真的。
...

笑聊兄身体有恙？祝早日康复。多保重！

谢谢庆宏兄关怀！准备下月中旬住院治疗。

祝笑聊兄身体早日康复！

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Posted: 2010-10-23 19:51:42 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

笑聊保重身体!

谢谢白云兄！

一声保重人心暖，殷切关怀长辈情！！！

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Posted: 2010-10-23 20:11:15 Post subject:

谢谢庆宏兄！盈盈祝福暖心怀，友谊深深印海崖！！！

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Posted: 2010-10-24 07:43:52 Post subject:

笑聊,至重要是自己保持一颗平常心,开怀宽襟,身体就容易康复. 笑聊,住院那里,允许上网吗? 因为我感觉精神支柱很重要,上网相互唱咏诗词是一种很好的精神启导! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-10-24 14:16:54 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

笑聊,至重要是自己保持一颗平常心,开怀宽襟,身体就容易康复.
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问好白云兄！
说的对，精神很重要。谢谢兄长（老师）呵护关爱！

我不知道那医院的情况。上次在体检中心住了一晚，那地方好象有宽带。我会带手提电脑去的。

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