戴玨
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 Posted: 2010-10-17 04:48:45 Post subject: 鵬城二章 |
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南歌子·自鵬城回港
玉頰鬟絲墜，釅茶滋味清。盧瞳貝齒囀鶯聲，是幻是仙、還是夢初醒？
夭裊風輕送，綢繆喜自生。新秋小別不傷情，夜雨闌珊、反路映殘燈。
鵬城秋望
滿目秋光憶霧都，蓮花山下踏長衢。
研攻抱獨橫海志，俯仰廝磨明月珠。
昔見霜楓舞黃葉，今聞重九負丹萸。
棲遲日久思騫翮，連理枝頭夕照徂。
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霧都：指倫敦，筆者念大學的地方。
蓮花山：指鵬城（即深圳）的蓮花山公園。
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2010-10-17 08:13:16 Post subject: |
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鹏城秋望,句句情深.祝秋安!
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-10-17 15:57:22 Post subject: |
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| 秋，是收获的季节；秋，是抒发情感的时候。问好！ |
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戴玨
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| Posted: 2010-10-20 13:06:26 Post subject: |
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謝各位評論。
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新秋小別不傷情
看望 问候 祝春日愉快。
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冰清
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| 好词好律：声、情并茂，神、志兼备。 |
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杨洛
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凭弦说心事
却是美人带愁吟
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胡恢宗
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是幻是仙、還是夢初醒？
欣赏佳作，向您问好。
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